Tuesday, 23 October 2018

Shop Day Advert

We are learning to advertise our product to earn money that is going toward end of the term trips
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  1. Anonymous25 October 2018 at 10:11

    Hi Josh, I'm Scott from Pompallier Catholic School, Kaitaia. We're also a Manaiakalani school. I really liked how well you advertised everything on the first page. You could add some adjectives that would change the way the reader would feel about this. Some more pictures could help the overall affect on slides 2 through 4.

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    1. Anonymous28 November 2018 at 10:28

      Thanks for the advice I will try to make some changes

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